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Silence

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Silence fills the blank space;
it is the loudest sound in the world,
yet there is no movement of any kind.
There is nothing to disturb the halcyon silence.

As gray and dead as a grave,
the room lays silent,
with all its possessions,
an abeyant state.

Strewn across the floor,
lie articles of days far past and gone;
splattered across the walls,
snapshots of a past life.

The serene silence does not last for long,
starting with the scratching of the key,
the creak of the knob,
soon interrupted by the abrupt slam of the door.

A lone figure enters the room,
tossing his bag upon the floor,
carelessly,
swaggering to the rumpled bed,
falling upon it,
heavily.

A faint light pours through the window,
a palpable stream of hazy illumination,
lights up the dust,
flashing,
dancing with the wind,
increased,
with the swirling blades swishing from the ceiling.

White is the color of the walls,
turned gray,
with the absence of light,
interrupted by the faint light streaming
from the hazy window.

Gray and drab are the colors of the bed,
sitting in the corner,
bordering the wall.

The carpet,
soft and worn,
frayed from years of
trampling
upon the floor.

The shelf,
smooth and amber,
hold books,
like Atlas
holds the heavens
in which are stories,
of people,
of history,
of wisdom,
of galaxies,
of faith,
of hope,
far, far away,
so close,
so near.

This place is home.
The retreat with not but the faint voices of the wind,
the sounds of music,
gently whispering.

The sun sets outside,
the amber light dimming.
He closes his eyes slowly,
breaths shallowing,
moving on,
to worlds past,
future,
present,
never.
My first stab at literature on dA. Don't know if its good or bad - it's just what popped into my head. I hope you like it.
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hmmm...quite interesting...i took it as he was released in dreams...but then again by the description of the atlas and the direct noting of the bookshelf and the bed alone as objects in the room, it would seem to compare reading to dreaming as releases. or not even compare but to suggest that. and also i find it quite ironic how he calls the place his home when clearly it seems unattended to- white, gray, past, old articles and such mentioned a lot. So it made me think if perhaps he was that way himself as he deemed it home, or if he referred to the place as home because it housed the books and figuratively the dreams. so then it would actually be referring to the books and dreams as home and not the actual room. OH and also, its a wonder why he kept the room itself locked and not the rest and why he calls the room alone room. but then that brings me back to the earlier thought that the books and dreams inside the room are home and perhaps he locks the room itself to keep them safe in a way to protect his home. but whev im probably looking annoyingly far into it lol. but just musing i suppose. but yah i guess all you really wanted to know is whether or not i liked it...and well i loved looking into it and can appreciate that without such descriptive and careful work that probably wouldn't have been possible. so yah i guess i did enjoy it after all. :D